Why Your Script Is Everything
Most companies obsess over animation style while neglecting the script. This is backwards. A mediocre video with a great script will outperform a stunning video with weak messaging every time.
The script determines:
- What you say — your core message and value proposition
- How you say it — tone, pacing, and emotional arc
- What viewers remember — your hook and key takeaways
- What viewers do — your call-to-action
Rule of thumb: Spend 40% of your project time on the script. The remaining 60% is production. Never reverse this ratio.
The Proven Script Structure
After producing hundreds of SaaS explainer videos, we've refined a structure that consistently converts:
The P.A.S. Formula (60-90 seconds)
| Section | Duration | Purpose |
|---|---|---|
| Hook | 0-5 sec | Stop the scroll, create curiosity |
| Problem | 5-20 sec | Show you understand their pain |
| Agitate | 20-30 sec | Make the problem feel urgent |
| Solution | 30-50 sec | Introduce your product as the answer |
| Benefits | 50-70 sec | Show what life looks like after |
| CTA | 70-80 sec | Tell them exactly what to do next |
Step 1: Nail Your Hook
You have 3 seconds. Make them count. Here are hook formulas that work:
The Problem Statement
The Question
The Statistic
The Bold Claim
What NOT to do:
- Start with your logo animation
- Start with "Hi, we're [Company Name]"
- Start with generic statements like "In today's fast-paced world..."
Step 2: Define the Problem
The problem section builds relatability. Your viewer should think: "Yes, that's exactly my situation!"
Be Specific
Generic problems don't resonate. Compare:
Use Their Language
Research how your customers describe their problems. Use those exact words. Check:
- G2 reviews (yours and competitors)
- Reddit threads in your niche
- Sales call recordings
- Support tickets
Step 3: Agitate the Pain
This is where many scripts fall short. Agitation makes the problem feel urgent. It's the difference between "I should fix this someday" and "I need to fix this now."
Agitation techniques:
- Cost of inaction: What happens if they don't solve this?
- Competitor comparison: Others are solving this—why aren't you?
- Emotional impact: How does this problem make them feel?
- Time pressure: This problem gets worse over time
Step 4: Introduce Your Solution
Now—and only now—do you talk about your product. The viewer is primed with pain. They want relief.
[VISUAL: Product interface appears with smooth animation]
The Feature-Benefit Bridge
Never list features without benefits. Use this formula:
Formula: [Feature] so you can [Benefit], which means [Outcome]
| Feature Only ❌ | Feature + Benefit ✅ |
|---|---|
| "We have real-time sync" | "Real-time sync means your team always has the latest data—no more outdated spreadsheets" |
| "Built-in analytics dashboard" | "See exactly which deals are at risk so you can save them before they slip away" |
| "One-click integrations" | "Connect your entire stack in minutes, not months—no developers required" |
Step 5: Show the Benefits
Paint the "after" picture. What does life look like once they use your product?
The Rule of Three
Highlight exactly 3 benefits. More than 3 becomes overwhelming. Less than 3 feels incomplete.
- Benefit 1: The primary value (usually time or money saved)
- Benefit 2: A secondary value (usually process improvement)
- Benefit 3: An emotional value (usually peace of mind or confidence)
Step 6: Craft Your CTA
The call-to-action must be:
- Single: One action, not three options
- Specific: "Start your free trial" not "Learn more"
- Low friction: Make it feel easy
CTA Examples
Script Writing Best Practices
1. Write for the Ear, Not the Eye
Read your script aloud. If it sounds stilted, rewrite it. Spoken language is different from written language.
2. Keep Sentences Short
Long sentences are hard to follow in video. Break them up. One idea per sentence.
3. Use "You" More Than "We"
The video is about the viewer, not you. Count your pronouns:
- ❌ "We built the best CRM. We have 10 years of experience. We help companies..."
- âś… "You deserve a CRM that works. You'll save 10 hours weekly. You'll close more deals..."
4. Avoid Jargon
If your mom wouldn't understand it, simplify it. Technical audiences still appreciate clarity.
5. Include Visual Cues
The script should guide the visuals. Include notes for the animation team:
[VISUAL: Smooth zoom into dashboard interface, highlighting key metrics with animated callouts]
Full Script Example
Here's a complete 60-second script for a fictional SaaS product:
[VISUAL: Animated stat comparison, urgent red/green contrast]
PROBLEM (5-15 sec): "The culprit? Inconsistent follow-ups. Leads fall through the cracks. Hot prospects go cold. Deals die in pipeline purgatory."
[VISUAL: Leads falling through cracks animation, calendar with missed tasks]
AGITATE (15-25 sec): "Meanwhile, your competitors respond in minutes while you're still scheduling reminders. Every hour of delay drops your close rate by 7%."
[VISUAL: Clock ticking, competitor stealing deal]
SOLUTION (25-40 sec): "Velocify automates your follow-up sequence. Leads get the right message at the right time—automatically. Our AI predicts the best moment to reach out."
[VISUAL: Product interface, automated email sequences, AI insights]
BENEFITS (40-55 sec): "Close 40% more deals. Save 12 hours per rep, per week. Never let a hot lead go cold again."
[VISUAL: Results dashboard, happy sales team, growing pipeline]
CTA (55-60 sec): "Start your free trial today. Setup takes 5 minutes."
[VISUAL: Simple signup form, checkmark animation, logo]
Frequently Asked Questions
How many words should an explainer video script be?
Plan for approximately 150 words per minute of video. A 60-second explainer video script should be 140-160 words. A 90-second video needs about 200-230 words. Always leave room for visual storytelling—don't fill every second with narration.
What is the best structure for an explainer video script?
The most effective structure is the Problem-Agitate-Solution (PAS) formula: Hook (5 sec), Problem (15 sec), Agitation (10 sec), Solution (20 sec), Benefits (15 sec), CTA (5 sec). This structure builds emotional connection before presenting your product.
Should I write the script before the storyboard?
Yes, always write the script first. The script determines pacing, messaging, and structure. The storyboard then visualizes the script. Writing script and storyboard simultaneously leads to misaligned messaging and wasted revisions.
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